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The Best Vacation Ever I’ve had many vacations, but only one was my favorite. My favorite vacation was when we went to california. We went to San Diego California. We went by plane. That was exciting. We flew to chicago and racing through the terminal to make a connecting flight that took us all the way to California. It was beautiful there. There was lots of nice scenery; the beach trees and the mountains. When we got to San Diego we went to our Hotel. It was exciting staying in the hotel I liked to get a chance to stay somewhere else for a while. There was a pool right next to our hotel. It was an indoor pool. We jumped in, splashed around, and raced. They also had hot tubs their. It was so relaxing just to sit in them. There was a trolley car that ran behind our hotel. One day we rode it all the way to Tijuana! That was a real treat! It was magnificent. The trolley moved so slowly we could see all the sights. I had fun there. It was a great vacation How would you rate this essay on content? Give it a score of 1 (low) to 6 (high). There are at least 12 mechanical errors. Can you circle them? |