Thankful Thanksgiving

By Anna Taylor

     This Thanksgiving I am thankful for three things. I am thankful for my parents. They are always there when I need them. They love me and I love them back. He gave me life. They give me security and shelter.

I'm also thankful for Dandridge, my hometown. I wouldnt want to live anywhere else.  Dandridge is a frendly and safe place to live.  Everyone knows each other and watches out for each other.

     And finally, I'm grateful for the good food we enjoy each thanksgiving. It brings my family together every year. It makes this year a thankful year, which reminds me of the Pilgrims and indians who became friends. It has a special magic that bonds families together.

     In conclusion, I am grateful for my parents, my hometown, and especially the Thanksgiving food

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